Thursday 6 December 2007

Last of the Mohicans


At the end of the story, Alice writes a letter to a friend in Scotland.She tells her friend about Uncas, Chinachgook, Hawkeye and Cora.Write Alice's letter.

Hawkeye is white man.Chinachgook is Mohican Indiean chief.Chinachgook is Uncas's father.Uncas is last of The Mohicans.Cora is my elder sister.
Uncas, Chinachgook and Hawkeye, they were really kind for us.And the fought to Huron and save us from Huron attack.So that we could arrive at fort and met our father.But I'm incredibly sad, Uncas and Cora dead by Huron Indean's knife.

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6 comments:

  1. Hey Yuji,

    Good try, and well done adding the picture. There are a couple of spelling mistakes, which I'll let you correct :)

    Cheers - Jim

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  2. I had read this story. I'll write No.12 "Major Heyward wants to marry Alice. Why was Colonel Munro unhappy when Heyward told him ?

    Because Colonel Munro thought Major Heyward wanted to marry Cora when Heyward said he would like to marry one of Munro's doughters. And Munro remenbered his life. Cora's mother is a West Indies' lady. Many white people dislike these people. Munro thought Heyward felt Cora was different from Alice as not white people.

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  3. Hi Taka,

    Conjunctions...words like "and", "so", "but", "because" ....join ideas together in the same sentence (separated by a comma maybe); they should not be used to start sentences.

    Also, please check the singular form of people?!

    Jim

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  4. Hi Jim,
    Thanks your comments.
    I think "Indiean" and "Indean's" are wrong.
    Are "Indian" and "Indian's" right?

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  5. I thought that it was difficult to understand the stream of whole story, because this book is very shorten and the unfolding of story is fast.However I read this story excitingly. I want to watch this movie someday.
    -------------------------
    "How does Chingachgook feel after Uncas dies?"
    He feels that Mohican's generation should be end. because the turbulent world that is controled by foreign stock (Examples, England, French, etc.) will come.

    "What will he do now?"
    He exists somewhere in obscurity as a person, not be a mohican any more.
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    Masanori Yagasaki

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  6. At the end of the story, Alice writes a letter to a friend in Scotland.She tells her friend about Uncas, Chinachgook, Hawkeye and Cora.Write Alice's letter.

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    Dear Friend,
    My Father Fight For U.K. in the America continent.
    The wild peple called the netive American live in the America.
    Some of them become our friend and help us.
    The old day, I tripped to his fort with my sister Cola, and 3 Indians help us.
    Mr. Chingachgook is the chief of Mohican tribe, and he worries about the future of his tribe.
    Mr. Hawkeye is friends of Mr. Chingachgook, but he is a strange man,
    because he may be a white man.
    Mr. Uncas is son of Mr. Chingachgoook, and friends of my sister.
    but he killed to help her. And, My sister Cola chose death for her honor.
    I am going to stay at the America for a while with my father.

    Sincerely.

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